Star stories 28th march 2014
Don't Play Rough Again by Sam: First Class: Ms. mc. intyre
One summers day there were two children. Their names were Tom Jill. They were just home from school. Then they got
into their football tracksuits. Then they went outside to play football. Then they were soloing, kicking, diving and passing. Then a wasp came by and then they kicked the ball at the wasp. Then it went threw the wasp and then it hit the shed and then it hit the glass off the shed. Then mammy came out and she was shocked.
Then she grounded them and she didn't let them have sweets for a week.They were so so so sad.
The Accident by Luca: Second Class: Ms. Mc Loughlin
One day it was Danny's birthday and one of Danny's birthday presents was a football. The week after that Danny and his sister Sarah went outside to play football. During the match Sarah accidently kicked the ball at the shed window. Sarah said to Danny not to tell Mam and Dad yet. Sarah went into the shed to get the ball. When she came out of the shed she sneaked into the house to get glue for the shed window. Sarah gave the glue to Danny to try to fix the window. Danny tried and tried and tried to fix the window but it just wouldn't work. Then Sarah and Danny went inside to tell Mam and Dad about the broken window.
Danny said, "When we were playing football Sarah kicked the ball and it hit the shed window by accident". Sarah snuck in to get the glue to try to fix the window but it didn't work."
"Sorry", said Sarah.
Mam got the phone and phoned the window company. When the window was fixed everybody was very happy. Danny and Sarah played football in the garden again but were very careful never to hit the shed again.
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