Sam H.

one rainy day i was sitting on the couch playing my ds. then something stange happened. i got sucked into the ds and was trapped in mario land. mario came along and said can you help me defeat bowser and rescue princess peach. i said yes lets go!! we jumped over lava, we climbed ropes, we jumped on mushrooms to kill them so they wouldnt kill us. we collected coins. it was crazy. we came along to a wizard. he threw fire at me. mario saved me from the wizard. next level... we had fire power to save princess peach from wicked bowser. at last we got to the final level. it was in a castle, bowsers castle infact.. there was flaming balls. mario was so heroic. we met bowsers friend. he did not like mario. he nearly killed him but he had 2 lives left so he survived. mario killed bowsers friend at last. it was so hard. suddenly luigi came through a portal. he said princess peach is in grave danger. we have to save her now.!! ok lets go! then an army of mushrooms and turtles ganged up on us. then mario used fire power and killed them all. horray!!! ROOOAAARRRRRRRRR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ooohhh noooo bowser!! "save me mario" said princess peach. i transported my mam into the game. she said whats going on here! is this real?? yes said bowser. aaahhhh get me out of here right now sam!! luigi got his toad army and killed bowser. mario took me and my mam to the transporter. he said thanks for the help to me. you might become a hero some day. thanks said my mam to mario. we went into the transporter then we ended up back on the couch playing my ds. i had completed the game. it was the best day ever!!! the end ;)